That Look

That look that I once hid was what killed me

When you walked away and didn’t look back

I smiled at first, turned my face and cried so bad,

Unlucky me was in that day, when I lost what I had.

 

That look that I kept in secret took away my joy

It made me fifty years older and stole my toy,

It didn’t realize that I was still so young to be hurt

But you were so dumb and you went for it.

 

That look that I once drew in my book was a secret

It was the mystery of every tear I shed

And it was the true feeling that I once had

Yet, you never cared, so let’s rip that, too.

Author's Note

Inspired by the movie "Love Actually "too.

For him xxx........................ Hope you like

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

Great poem. I enjoyed reading

[khalid]

hidden love really kills...nice image..

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, such a touching and intimate moment where the glass of our perceived invincibility seems to shatter and leave us in shock and awe because we expected it to last. You capture the exemplified sense of loss so perfectly and the ensuing, sudden urge to destroy that portion of your past. Well done, I know this feeling well.

[wordman]

just another page of our lives great job

[Eve Ola]

I once drew in my book was a secret, It was the mystery of every tear I shed ....
i just have dont words for these best lines. like you wrote a part of me!!

[Ayushi]

I liked the lines
"It didn’t realize that I was still so young to be hurt
But you were so dumb and you went for it."
Nice read :)