His Heaven

you told me you love me, why did you leave ?

His heaven

As she walked through the door of her destiny

Her soul called his name with no answer around.

She held her dignity and called up her pride

All what she asked for is heaven and him by her side.

 

As the doors of heaven opened to her face so wide

She looked around, ignoring the beauty of the skies

She looked in each corner and in every room as she cried

Looking for him and searching for his smiles.

 

She kept on looking for him in the whole seven skies

When, after centuries and long days of strive

She found him there on earth flirting with her eyes

She thought it was a night mere or even a lie.

 

She looked to the right of her side, and with strong pride

She begged God to send a storm to their sides

He was shocked and his date was too

But she never cared because she was a child in her love.

 

God called his name few days later after the storm

When he was being thrown in hell, she grabbed his hand

She pulled him to her side in heaven and make it his

He left her on earth, but she made herself his servant in her his heaven

Author's Note

I hope you like :)

Reviews

[R Smith]

it is a lovely poem Suhad and has the promise of a great work it just needs a few edits towards the end, i hope that's helpful because with a rework there you will have one very excellent poem :)

[MsJewel]

I find it difficult to write a story within a poem, but you did this so well! Your poetry just keeps getting better and better.

This is lovely

:) Julie