Smile To The World

Nights are passing by without a hey or a bye

Just days assigns that they are not a lie ,

For the nights are lonely and the days are gray

The sky is frowning and the clouds are the prey.

 

To my grieveness and my wintery eyes,

For the late nights secret cries

Smiles start to dim and the sun is their new inn

The moon is standing still and the earth is giving its grin.

 

Move away the curtains and stand between the meadows

Look at the stars and the lonely moon with no friendly shadows,

Hold your pieces and smile with your tears

Teach the world how to be sunny when the rain shows its fears.

Author's Note

Just a thought, i hope you like (11:18 pm, 28-9-2014)

Reviews

[Saumya]

amazing write zuhad!:)
loved it completely n specially the last stanza:

Move away the curtains and stand between the meadows

Look at the stars and the lonely moon with no friendly shadows,

Hold your pieces and smile with your tears

Teach the world how to be sunny when the rain shows its fears."

all the best n well done:)

[ayesha gupta]

a heart-touching poem. liked reading it.

[Chris]

Reminds me of sitting on a rooftop and dream-gazing the night sky. The thoughts that float and flow to the distant sounds and city-glows. We tell ourselves many things ...then... dream through moments, little-nothing wishes that feel like they should matter.

Good thoughts to lead me away... thank you.

[Briana O'Connor]

Very excellent sentiment. Love the concept and the way you expressed it. Very well penned.

[Dayran]

A positive attitude is its own friend. Nice ...

[Pax]

I really do like it! It starts a sad tune but ends up a postive vibe to create a sunny smile. Beautiful piece my friend... :)

[wordman]

a lovely but sad poem lots of emotions

[Lydia Shutter]

Lots of good imagery and good rhyming here. Uplifting thoughts. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

[R Smith]

I love your style of writing and the meaning you give to your words gives me so much to take in, the truth is here, follow the stars and smiles always, thank you Suhad :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Suhad is a very talented poet who writes very well. One small point, you mean grievousness, griveness is not correct.Fine work.