Im sorry

let me do whatever i want
let me fly with you where ever you go
let us be together
im so sorry because
i hated you once
im so sorry because
i didn't recognize your face
that was covered with mud
I love you now
as i never loved anyone
you were my eyes
when i was blind
you were my hands
when i forgot touching
you were always in my back
holding me when i fall
and protecting me
when im in danger
you are my life and my love
im sorry because
i hurt you once
i want not to be another again
let us be together and fly to the moon
let us live on Jupiter
and i want you to know

i love you forever

Reviews

[Raindrop]

You pulled me in with emotion you have described. :)
Beautifully done!

[J.M]

I love everything except 'hurt-ed' - shouldn't it just be hurt. But apart from that you captured this emotion brilliantly - that love we all feel at one time in our lives, and all want another to feel for us. Good job!

[XxtaintedxX]

This is really sweet(: I like it

[stars are far]

thanks priyankaabhilaashi :D

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fabulous..!!