life

Life is like a bridge
                        you can cross it with you faith
you can love it
                     when you are honest
because then
                    you will win the race

and live truly inside the heart of the earth

life will love you  

Reviews

[E.V. Black]

Not what I expected when I was going to read about life. I think it's an interesting view, but it's too broad or narrow. I can't decide. It's quite narrow because it only compares life to one thing. It's too broad because the comparison is very general. I think if you made it more specific, and more relatable, the poem's quality will be exponentially better.