My last Goodbye

I'm saying goodbye
And want to fly
To the second world
with my white dress
and my black tears .

I'm saying goodbye
and praying for the day
that i'll see your e-mail
wanna tell you the truth
before i go
i just love you
as i'll always do

I'm saying Goodbye
And i want to do
to let you free
from me in love with thee
can't hold it any more
just wanna say
my last           GOODBYE

Author's Note

it is not nice -i think-
what do you say ?

Reviews

[Daniel88Batson]

I love the white dress and black tears. Lovely piece. Judging by this you may enjoy some of my stuff. Have a look =D

[Jackson Lai]

It is really nice...

[J.M]

It's not 'nice', but nor are the emotions expressed here, nor is life. It's better than nice - it's true. Well written and brutally honest.

[EMF]

No. It's not nice, but honest and extremley well written. I think it shows transition well, and the flow is excellent. Very impressive

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice and romantic...

[Sara]

I really liked it =)