IM tired

I'm tired of screaming in the air 

and i find no one hearing me 

I'm tired if making stories in my head

and no one is listening 

I'm tired of joining the atoms of love in my heart 

and no one is feeling me ..

I'm tired of giving you my happiness 

and i find you not caring ..

I'm tired of building castles in dreams

and they are still empty 

I'm really tired 

Believe me  

Reviews

[shoaib]

great job :)

[MarkDeanReview]

Good!

[Shy Girl]

We can all connect to this piece at one time or another. You write with an amazing amount of emotion. This is the first of yours I've read. Looking forward to more. =)

[EMF]

Another painfully drawn poem, handled like a pro. Cracking.

[Jeremy Baker]

Clearly expressed, heartfelt emotions, and a top form! Well done.

[Rebecca 8D]

A beautiful concept wonderfully written.A very emotive piece which creates great imagery.Well done :) I look forward to reading more of your writing,this looks very promising :D A joy to read ♥

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

As usual the emotions and thoughts expressed are top notch. A pleasure to read:)

Yas

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I know this feeling rather well.
There are sometimes I feel this way.
Loved the emotion in this write.