My past

My past is keeping a thorn 

in my softy heart 

because every beautiful flower 

has thorns 

and you are my beautiful flower 

but our break up 

was that thorn...

                               29/7/2011

                                    10:17 PM 

Author's Note

enjoy

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

A true and beautiful poem. I like the way how you use "every flower has thorns" as a way to tell your whole story out. Just like rose, it's beautiful and it got thorns on it. The imagery and the emotion you have written out stunned me. Well penned! :)

[Star Wolf]

So true! Every rose has its thorns. Awesome job on this. It is a very enjoyable read!

[Desmund Tiny]

i love this. so beautiful....well written......^^,

[fluorescence]

wow this is so simple yet so beautifully written! love it!wow this is so simple yet so beautifully written! love it!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love it. I like how you used the flower as a way to tell your story about what happened. I like the use of thorns for pain and the flower as the relationships. Nicely write.

[Darkest Rose]

I love this so much! It's so true, like flowers have there thorns so do relationships! Amazing write! :)

[Hotwater]

How creative is this wonderful work of art. Top draw.
*bird*

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You have such a way with romantic words and imagery that is just stunning to me :)