They Say

They Say

A Poem by stars are far

They always say no

For love or even to adore..

 

They always stand in-front

The faces of smiles of lovers …

 

They say you are still young

To walk with a girl

Or to talk with a boy …

 

They feel you are bad

If you set your heart free

To hold a boy

Or to kiss a girl ..

 

Why we are like this??

Love is related to hearts

That catch the rain drops

And draw a smile

Upon his face

Or a laugh on hers

 

Don’t know why you feel this

But if you looked

In your past history books

You will find

That one day

You said so

And stand in the face

Of them to say to him or her

I love you


16/8/2011

3:55 PM

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Hope you like this :)
it came to my mind while i was watching a movie about this thing ...

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its so good to see people writing about the current problems people face...
Everyone has got an individual life and they have the right to live it..
Still there are much differences betwwen humans on basis of there religion caste creed or as the case in your poem...

A very nice write indeed...
Great workk...


Posted 14 Years Ago


its so good to see people writing about the current problems people face...
Everyone has got an individual life and they have the right to live it..
Still there are much differences betwwen humans on basis of there religion caste creed or as the case in your poem...

A very nice write indeed...
Great workk...


Posted 14 Years Ago


I have a friend in united states of arabia whom has this very problem and dares not to tell her parents she is dating in college, strange how life still imitates art, for these emotions and these fears always bring Romeo and Juliet to mind. Beautifully crafted poem, love the emotions and the imagery, keep em' coming

ps thank you for the I adore you translation

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice poem.
*bird*

Posted 14 Years Ago


Really profound poem about all of society's hang ups. It raised a lot of questions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice poem, good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


So true as well, love your tender thoughts that you convey with beauty and class :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


a nice poem


Posted 14 Years Ago



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