First and last message

Dear my love :

 

Those days are moving while you are away ,I can’t blame you for anything you might say that I would be a loser or I’m a crazy for falling into your love, but please can you just hear me once I’m really falling hard for you, I’m really crying daily over you but please understand me ,I’m the only one that loved you like crazy, I’m waiting for your call daily even though I know that I will not get that from you, even if I waited all my life long that is impossible it is like waiting for the rain to fall in a desert in the presence of the burning sun …

 

Can’t you feel my agony ? I’m really into you …Can’t you feel that ?? , Im burning over your foot steps that are burning off the ground and also my broken heart … I really love you more than anyone did ..I really see you as my prince that i see his great shadow behind the mountains and I wish he could be mine , but that is only a dream , because there is no prince that could fall in love with a poor slave …

 

I’m writing for you from the two winters that came on , and now summer is laughing for his last day and you never read a single message , you never hear is single word, why you haven’t told me that you love me ?? although I did that million times .. And now im saying I LOVE YOU again …

 

I’m sending you the last message in my life ,I just want you to know that I really loved you  with all the passion I got with all the heart I have ,I’m just asking for one single thing , when I die and I’m laid under the ground sand … just stare at the sun set and you will listen to my voice there wending you the best love poems just like I did in my life so that you will not miss any thing from me and will always love you as I did in my life …

 

               The one that always love you

                                                                                             ME                                            

Author's Note

Dedicated for you ~s~..( i really love you )

Hope you like this :)
enjoy

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

That is one deep deep love you have, and looks like it sure will be his loss, how would anyone deny such great affection and love. What a love letter this is, wish someone wrote this for me... that's how people will be feeling. So awesome piece and good luck :)

[Black]

it is a deep emotional story
It is like a mind or a film just playing clearly,
nicely worded

[Inyourshadow]

Another beautiful tribute exclaiming your love for this other heart that beats in time with yours, love the way you went along the path of O Danny Boy as this song and your poem both speak of a love that knows no contrains of time and earthly bounds. Beautifully penned, keep em' coming.

If you've never heard the song you should it is a beautiful Scottish ballad.

[Linda]

Awwwee hope he reads it, excellent letter, lovey xoxxo

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Love this..!!! Fantastic..!!!!

[Thea]

Aw, it's all right, sis...True love performs numerous obstacles, so you gotta take all of it...Be strong enough to face it all...

About the story, somewhat sad but I enjoyed reading it... :)))

[EMF]

The new style is really nice. Very fluid and free form. Nice work.

[Dove]

This is so heartbreaking and deep

[Hotwater]

Passionate!
*bird*

[Sarah McConnaughey]

I found spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors, but the story itself is very sad and heartbreaking. I know very well what it's like to care that much for someone and for the feelings to not be returned.