First and last message

First and last message

A Story by stars are far

Dear my love :

 

Those days are moving while you are away ,I can’t blame you for anything you might say that I would be a loser or I’m a crazy for falling into your love, but please can you just hear me once I’m really falling hard for you, I’m really crying daily over you but please understand me ,I’m the only one that loved you like crazy, I’m waiting for your call daily even though I know that I will not get that from you, even if I waited all my life long that is impossible it is like waiting for the rain to fall in a desert in the presence of the burning sun …

 

Can’t you feel my agony ? I’m really into you …Can’t you feel that ?? , Im burning over your foot steps that are burning off the ground and also my broken heart … I really love you more than anyone did ..I really see you as my prince that i see his great shadow behind the mountains and I wish he could be mine , but that is only a dream , because there is no prince that could fall in love with a poor slave …

 

I’m writing for you from the two winters that came on , and now summer is laughing for his last day and you never read a single message , you never hear is single word, why you haven’t told me that you love me ?? although I did that million times .. And now im saying I LOVE YOU again …

 

I’m sending you the last message in my life ,I just want you to know that I really loved you  with all the passion I got with all the heart I have ,I’m just asking for one single thing , when I die and I’m laid under the ground sand … just stare at the sun set and you will listen to my voice there wending you the best love poems just like I did in my life so that you will not miss any thing from me and will always love you as I did in my life …

 

               The one that always love you

                                                                                             ME                                            

© 2011 stars are far


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stars are far
Dedicated for you ~s~..( i really love you )

Hope you like this :)
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That is one deep deep love you have, and looks like it sure will be his loss, how would anyone deny such great affection and love. What a love letter this is, wish someone wrote this for me... that's how people will be feeling. So awesome piece and good luck :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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awwww!!! i really do wish you the best!!! your so sweet, if i were him and i read this i would love you forever, an amazing dedication, so deep and beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate love from one to another, one last message, a message of hope,

Beautifully composed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Definately a deep love here.. man.. you truely are in love ^o^ Wonderful message. You showed your feelings well here. =D

Nicely done!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


amzing and really beautiful !:) sweet roantic agree with yas this is deep love :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a beautiful message that really showed your love and affection. Such a wonderful love letter.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 14 Years Ago


' What has been said of kings, we may say of the waves--we are their people, we are their prey.' Victor Hugo in ' The Man Who Laughs '

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last message given is sometimes the one that lasts the lifetime.. simple last words in eternity's grasp... :) xx love it...xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is one deep deep love you have, and looks like it sure will be his loss, how would anyone deny such great affection and love. What a love letter this is, wish someone wrote this for me... that's how people will be feeling. So awesome piece and good luck :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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