I will walk ..

I will walk ..

A Poem by stars are far

I will walk …

 

I will walk away

Today and never come any day

I’ve been hurt once

Why should I bet again ?

My first bet was my heart

My second bet was my soul

Now I have nothing

To do in my life

I will just move away

And make you enjoy

Today and everyday

I really loved you once

But I lost this war

After I fought till my last blood drop

But for now

It is just a goodbye

And I’m sure there won’t be a hello

Goodbye

4/9/2011

4;45 PM 

© 2011 stars are far


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stars are far
I hope you like this ...
written for him ;)

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This was beutiful it really was



Posted 14 Years Ago


remindsme of goodbye llullaby of a vril alvigne but nice poem !:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it! pure emotion. this is amazing!! Very nice piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Liked it a lot. Lucky man.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this! It's so sad. So emotional.. but don't worry, with every ending, there's a new beginning. =D
Fantastic work!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Emotional write good piece and with time as you walk i betting there will be new hellos!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sweet piece!

~M.Babu~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great work..!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


"But for now

It is just a goodbye "

i'm doing this too
great write

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2011
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