I will walk ..

I will walk …

 

I will walk away

Today and never come any day

I’ve been hurt once

Why should I bet again ?

My first bet was my heart

My second bet was my soul

Now I have nothing

To do in my life

I will just move away

And make you enjoy

Today and everyday

I really loved you once

But I lost this war

After I fought till my last blood drop

But for now

It is just a goodbye

And I’m sure there won’t be a hello

Goodbye

4/9/2011

4;45 PM 

Author's Note

I hope you like this ...
written for him ;)

Reviews

[Thea]

It started in just a simple "hi"
And
It ends just with a goodbye...

Now, you have decided...Go for it...You'll find a better man someday, Suhad...
I love this...Great job... :)))

[Becky C Strukamp]

Nice write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like your breakthrough moment....well can't be 100% sure in these matters though!!! Really love the feelings expressed here..wonderful :)

[Sakib]

This is good for you. I hope you find the right person in your life. This poem is good. It expresses your feelings. There are some typos though. "hearted" should be hurt. I know you'll fix that. I enjoyed it. :)