ME

I’m a normal person

Who have dreams

Who imagine he is great

And he is the center of the earth ..

 

I’m a normal person

Who had her heart broken

And her dreams stopped

And her tears shaded …

 

I’m a normal person

Who looked for love

Under the ground

And above the clouds …

 

I’m a normal person

Who wants to be free

From the prison of life

And from the words of enemies…

 

I’m a normal person

Who would sing that song

Of love and break up …

 

I’m a normal person

Writing on writers café

Who would sleep

And wake up at the mid of the night

And have a question :

“how many reviews I got ?”

Not like some people

“how many fans I got ?”

 

I’m a normal person

Who have friends and enemies

With a great friend and sis

That would never leave me alone

She loves me, I love her too..

 

I’m a normal person

Who would travel all over the world

To find

The truth, the safety, the passion

To find

The friend, the love ..

 

I’m a normal person

That you can report in your lives

Her heart is broken

By the sweetest hummer in the world

And joined

By the safetest glue in the world

His hand ;)

Author's Note

i was describing me in this :DD

so what do you thik about me ?
if anything changed i will add it :D

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow, this is so nice and does poetically describe you as a person so elegently with passion and truth.... truly magnificent piece of work...and just how great is the last stanza for pure poetism....but well you may think you are normal but for me amazing etc would describe you better :)

[Enigma]

A wonderful description. I can relate to this, especially about the part waking up in the midnight. I don't REALLY wake up this way, but after I publish a piece, I always have that writer's anxiety regarding the response I would get from my readers.

Well penned. Add something if you feel like, otherwise its fine as it is. :)

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really amazing write. I enjoyed this, you did a wonderful job!

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is really poetic, I like it a lot.
Most people here on writerscafe wakes up in the midle of the night, wondering "Did I get any reviews in the past few hours?"
So do I... I can kinda relate to this poem.

Very well done and nicely written.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Fontane Wong]

Wonderful piece. Well penned. Love it so much. :)

[Suzy Q]

I like this! It could be fixed a little when it comes to grammar, but other than that, I think it's great.

[Sunni Davis]

Very nice. Though it was about you, I think each of us can find something to relate to in this.

[Yina]

Aw you sound really sweet an caring:) Beautiful to:) Love it!!:)

[Dove]

This is fantastic and i love how you were able to describe yourself so beautifully. My favorite stanzas are 6 and 8. They really touched me and the 6th one kind a relates to me. Again Fantastic job. I couls read this poem over and over and i would never get tired of reading it.

[Andrea Vargas]

I think you and your writing is fantastic and i am always eager to see what you have come up with! (:

-andrea vargas