ME

I’m a normal person

Who have dreams

Who imagine he is great

And he is the center of the earth ..

 

I’m a normal person

Who had her heart broken

And her dreams stopped

And her tears shaded …

 

I’m a normal person

Who looked for love

Under the ground

And above the clouds …

 

I’m a normal person

Who wants to be free

From the prison of life

And from the words of enemies…

 

I’m a normal person

Who would sing that song

Of love and break up …

 

I’m a normal person

Writing on writers café

Who would sleep

And wake up at the mid of the night

And have a question :

“how many reviews I got ?”

Not like some people

“how many fans I got ?”

 

I’m a normal person

Who have friends and enemies

With a great friend and sis

That would never leave me alone

She loves me, I love her too..

 

I’m a normal person

Who would travel all over the world

To find

The truth, the safety, the passion

To find

The friend, the love ..

 

I’m a normal person

That you can report in your lives

Her heart is broken

By the sweetest hummer in the world

And joined

By the safetest glue in the world

His hand ;)

Author's Note

i was describing me in this :DD

so what do you thik about me ?
if anything changed i will add it :D

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow, this is so nice and does poetically describe you as a person so elegently with passion and truth.... truly magnificent piece of work...and just how great is the last stanza for pure poetism....but well you may think you are normal but for me amazing etc would describe you better :)

[Sleepless]

you are amazing !:) love the poem :)

[EMF]

too painful to comment upon objectivley. It leaves me with anger, if you feel truly like this. Not anger at you, or any person in particular. Just the pain. I have to agree with our friend Yas. In all respects. Another word common to both of you.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very lovely write, how we see ourselves, happy, sad, heartbroken. You composed it beautifully. Love the font and structure.

[Sakib]

The best think about you is your simplicity
Anyone can hold himself to you, you have that gravity
You are so friendly, love your writing immensely
God bless you; I hope you live your whole life euphorically

;)