Won't you regret it ???

Won’t you regret it ???

 

You left the moon ,venues and Mars

Just because I'm there

You went from heaven to hell

Just because i wanted to say "..."

 

I hold my breath

To give them for you

But you lived breathless

Just because they are from me ..

 

you left the sea and river

And went to a desert

Just because I was looking ...

 

I will just go and live there

In the place where no people can be found

In a place where the tears are the life

I will just live there

Between the animals of the forest ....

 

But when i die

Because of you i will leave ..

 

will you regret it

because in that day

you would have lost

Everything in your life

The moon the breath the sees

And won't you regret

that fact that you lost

    ME

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

and wish he regret it :(
but sure he won't ...

Reviews

[Sleepless]

stop thinking about him he really is not worth it and he did lose you he will regret so i was watching this rogram and the girl gets hartbroken but at the end he realizes that he lost something valuable they still have gootten back but he is thinking about it your poem is lovely and bittersweet if he i for you then he will say im sorry but if he is not then someone special is waiting for you :P

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..!!!

[Jeremy Baker]

Sounds like your good times have hit a bump or two? Good writing - the best way to deal with heartache!

[Dove]

A wonderful and emotional... great comb. This was a fantastic read keep it up

[paradise]

Oh I really like this especially the end of it its so good I LOVE IT :D

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Emotional and a wonderful write!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Emotional and well-written!

[Casper]

I can feel the emotion coming out of this poem. The anguish... This is perfectly written. I love it. Good job :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Really like the emotions in this poem and I think regret he will....regrets come as the older we get.

Excellent :)

[Sakib]

Nice one. Simple and sweet. I liked it. :)