The Hidden Star

You Said you can count the stars

But I'm saying you can't

Many also agrees ..

But you will always have a missing one

Which is the hidden me ...

Author's Note

I know it might be sowing a lot of self confidence but truly expressed it cause i never feel self confidence a lot :) ...

SO what do you think??

Reviews

[Dove]

Short yet meaningful. I love how you made the poem say so much but only in a few words. Great job!

[Some Random Person.]

This was a short, meaningful poem. In a good way, you're showing confidence. The poem expresses a lot in few words. Great job.

[SOUL LESS]

Umm...it's good in a way. But to call it poetry is going a bit too far. I've reviewed you before: you can write way better.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I think this is very nice....and yeah everone has hidden things and sides of themselves...great :)