Goodbye is the solution …

Goodbye is the solution …

 

When those days were going behind

And being forgotten under the leaves of the night

I couldn’t say a thing except a goodbye

From this day and on there is no you and I

It is just for the last eye to eye

So we should face this scene this time

And do not cry for the last time…

Goodbye’s ain’t easy

They just need a rock heart

They need someone like you and me …

 

Baby, you say love is a big thing

But I say love is everything

I wish that we could stay forever

But for now a goodbye

Is the solution ….

Author's Note

Hope you like this :)
i just wrote that ...

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

Sometimes beginnings aren't so simple
Sometimes goodbye's the only way....
Great song that. :) The poem...yes, well the subject matter is fine. I cannot relate so i can't really comment on that. As to the english...lemme see.
Possible revisions...

1. going behind: slipping by.
2. cut the "a" in the third line. and use "..." b/w except and goodbye
3. ain't destroys the romantic flow..it should be aren't anyway. grammar error.

As for the last stanza..."big thing" should be replaced. I can't find the exact words though :)
Some of my revisions have to do with grammar but mostly with flow...
Nice write :)

[Jeremy Baker]

nice write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

"Baby, you say love is a big thing
But I say love is everything"

Beautiful lines in such an exquisite poem...tremendous :)

[Sweets]

Nuuuu....good bye was never the solution nooboid -.-
you gotta face your problems, not run away from them =3
xD but yea...you might mean something else, no one knows D:
anywaysss...this is truly great, your best so far =)
Wonderful work sis x)