Best Birthday Ever

Best Birthday Ever

 

Since I woke up this day

I was thinking of you

You spread those spicy peppers on it

And make it all chillin ..

 

It's my best birthday

Cause one year before i didnt know you

It was just me

Stuck in the bloody river of pains ...

 

That "good morning"

I will never forget

Till the last word

After 8 hours of chat

without getting bored or sad

Just smiles and laughs t

till my "goodbye " appears

I said that

But my heart didn't ...

 

I can't stop thinking about you

And how you made my day

I will never forget this birthday

Just because

           you printed your words in it ...

Author's Note

I wrote this on my birthday 11/11/2011
But now i got time to type it ..written for a very special person ...
hope you like it ;)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So love this poem and the tempo is spot on....and some birthdays always stick out and be memorable because of a special person.... Love the terrific ending which captures the moments

"I can't stop thinking about you
And how you made my day
I will never forget this birthday
Just because you printed your words in it"

Beautiful poem and may your future birthdays be even more memorable and enjoyable :)

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaaawwww.... so flutterbyish.... I love the flow of this, very nice read... the last line, "you printed your words in it" Brilliant ending, that speaks so loud!!
write...write on!! = )