It is just an illusion …

It is just an illusion …

I know it is just something I imagine

Being with you or feeling your beauty,

I’m sure you are more mature than me

And you know things more than I do.

 

Loving you might not be real

I’m a teenager and this is not equivalent deal,

You know much things in this life

But I’m still testing it …

 

Doors of life

Are not fully opened yet

So is me ..

 

Man,

I know what I see it just an illusion

I’m sorry for this wrong words …

 

Teens must not trust their feelings

Cause they mistake a lot

But they have their rights

To love ,to leave freely

They have their own wonder  world

From girls of their make up to their cloths

And boys from their dates to their best games …

We all have illusions

Just like the one I had toward you …

 

25/11/2011

11:22 AM

Author's Note

I know it is not nice ,not even good..
But just something i thought about :)
Enjoy as much as you can ...

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Aww, it's not that bad. =) Don't be too harsh on your writing. I liked it and i love the message. It's true. We all have this "illusions" that we go through because our life is just starting. It's true to not always trust our own feelings because anything can complicate them and make us think we truely are in love or whatever it may be. It just depends on the situation.. and how we respond..
Great write though!! =D I enjoyed it.

[Inyourshadow]

Hey age brings wisdom not understanding for life will still shock and surprise you, the illusions and the fake will still be there to keep you on your toes.
You pen the adolescent angst well and allow the vent voice. Well done for sharing. Keep em' coming