You are my everything

You are my everything

 

I couldn’t believe

That you are saying this ....

"I mean everything to you "

Oh. I’m sure you are my everything too...

 

You are saying that :

"Many's are like you

But there is only one like me "

you said that

I'm perfect

But i think that

You haven’t looked at yourself before saying that....

 

I can't wait anymore

To talk with you

Or to find you on

Just to tell you that

"I love you"

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[screamin'ian]

Beautiful sentiment. When you use quotation marks (""), you should be quoting the other persons words exactly. I may be wrong, and correct me if I am, but the first quote should read: "You mean everything to me" This is what he is saying to you, correct?

[Tai Ryens]

The second stanza really made me think. Many of these teens nowadays are just throwing the words "I love you" "You're my everything" and stuff like that around like it's nothing, slandering the true meaning of love. I hate how people could say things exactly like that second stanza and not mean it. Wonderful poem, I didn't like it, I loved it!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I must say, you are very romantic by virtue of the terrific romantic poems you write....and this is very relatable in that I too can't wait to speak/chat to person I romantically love.....

Keep it up, a tremendous poem, so brilliant :)