It won’t start

It won’t start

A Poem by stars are far

It won’t start

 

Every day I wake up

I imagine you by my side

I look out of my window

And see all the trees

Smiling for a new day .

Then I became sure

That you are looking at them

From behind the non-shining sun ..

 

I look at your picture so deep

And kiss it, as if it was you .

I smeel your best perfume

As if I was breathing your love .

And then I wait for you

Before I wash my face ,Brush my teeth

Have my breakfast ,

I wait to talk with you ..

 

I wait with all my scenes

And I feel that

You are everything I live for .

Here your call,

It came to me

Like water in the middle of the desert .

 

I feel your sweet words

I taste your beautiful voice

And I live for that "I Love You " word ...

 

OH, baby

This is the way

How my day start

And you can see

That without you

It won't begin ..

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
For that special person :)
Hope you like it :)

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Well, it's quite obvious that you're in love with someone. It's a sweet poem, really, a hint of beauty too, but I feel that you could tap into your emotions quite deeper than this gets into them. You're capable of writing with deeper emotions, I know it, all you need to do is tap into them. Good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautifully written..!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

**I feel your sweet words

I taste your beautiful voice

And I live for that "I Love You " word ...**

feelin that right there!!
very nice flow to this write... almost holds a playful feeling to it. nicely done!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I feel your sweet words
I taste your beautiful voice
And I live for that "I Love You " word

Love has one feeling this way exactly...day starts and ends with love of that special person...

Love it and he sure is lucky :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Tyre, Lebanon



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