Waiting For The Meet

Waiting For The Meet

Can't wait to see your eyes

And to feel your sweet embrace

Few more days

And your mirage will be true

My dream will become alive

And the flowers of the spring

Will appear in winter ...

 

I can't wait to feel the cold

Between your arms

And see the bright

In the middle of the night .

 

I'm preparing myself  for the meet

Baby. My make-up is ready

My pink shirt too

My black pant is cleaned

So is my boots .

 

Sweet heart.

My heart is beating so hard

While being more closer for the meet

Man,

I'm ready to see you

Are you too?

Author's Note

I'm so ready !! Hope to see you soon :)

this piece might not be good by i wrote that in English period :D
Enjoy :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I think this is an excellent piece...really show the readiness of yourself for him so well....and describes those moments that girls go through real well....and the question at the end (I'm ready to see you....Are you too?) is the perfect way to end a great poem...well done :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great shot..!!!!

[Dove]

Fantastic poem. I can tell that you are ready for this special person to arrive. Remember every piece of literature is beautiful in some type of way. That includes this poem:)

[Andrea Vargas]

Lovely !! This is what you fely and on paper it went ! Fantastic

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

haha,you are ready for everything.

[Tai Ryens]

This was a cute right, sweet, not as captivating as your other writes though. Still, despite that, it had emotions flowing through with the lines. The ending seems okay, but to me, it just could have used a little more work. The fact that you wrote this in class seems to make me wonder why you're more focused on writing poems than doing work. You should be focused on school, not some silly writing.
Only kidding, of course, haha. I do the same every now and then. Amazing job!

[Thea]

Yay, Suhad! Go for it! :)))
I wish you the best!
This is a really sweet poem! Obviously, written from ones very own heart!
Like it! :)))

[Shy Girl]

Cute write. Good luck :)