I’m Not Asking For too much ….

I’m Not Asking For too much ….

 

I don’t care how do you look

Or how old your style is.

I don’t mind how careless you are

Or how crazy you act.

 

I just want you to be mine

Not matter how do you look

Or how do you want to be,

I’m sure that I’m not a beauty queen

But I’m someone

Who really loves you

And cares for you.

 

You have never been my knight

But you are my guardian angel

And I believe in that .

 

You are not a singer

But when you will sing

Just for me

I will feel that your voice

Is coming from the sky .

 

And man.

I know that you don’t like me now

But I’m not asking for so much

That is what you think

But in my vision

I’m asking for a pearl

From the middle of the ocean.

 

And man .

Don’t you remember

When you said you love me

And nothing will separate us

No matter for what we pass through

I promised that even oceans

Will not separate us .

 

But my love.

Your promises were gone with the wind

And ripped under the ice

In the ice ages

But mine

Were still itched in the stone

Beside the shore

Waiting for you to come back

And you haven’t come yet .

Are you planning to come back

Or you want to disappear forever.??

Just because I love you

I’m not asking for that big thing

I’m asking to get YOU.

 

9:24 PM

2/12/2011

Suhad

Author's Note

I hope he understand one day and come back to me :(
Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Ami N.]

Nicely written :) The longing and emotions in this poem are strong and nicely conveyed. Great job!

[Cassie Fraga]

longing for someone is so hard to endure!!
very nice with expressing... thanx for sharing!!

[screamin'ian]

i like the expression of longing and unrequited love, it is very descriptive. I did not like the font or the color, it made it difficult to read.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This a terrific example of a great poem...love the colours, the font and the
styling of this poem...

Above all the message based style of this poem is spot on...

Terrific work :)

[Sweets]

Pearl from the middle of the ocean isn't a lot?? :O
I think it's worth millions nooboid =3
anyways, this is such a great poem!
I truly loved every line of it, and every word =)