I wish you were real

I wish you were real

 

Every day I wait for you

But our chat lasts for one hour

and few minutes more .

I haven’t known you

From a long time

But your heart

Was like my home.

 

I've seen you

Just one time

But when I saw you ,

All of the bills were paid

The bills of friendship between us .

Your eyes were sparkling

Like the stars of the night

your smile killed me

It was like the lonely moon .

 

That black shirt

oh, I really loved

You were the one

That I was waiting to see .

With all my heart I say:

"you are perfect "

Believe this now .

 

I want our friendship

To last forever

I wish you were real

To hold you

And imprison you

Between my eyes .

 

But I hope for you to find

That special girl

That steel you

And prison you

In her heart

And pay for you

The bills of love .

 

Good Luck My Friend

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Author's Note

For the light in my dark
For the moon between the stars
For the friend that means a lot
For you my perfect friend .

Hope you all like it .

Reviews

[Thea]

This is wonderful...Really sweet!
Nicely written!
Great work!

[Tai Ryens]

Nicely written, I loved your metaphors about bills and friendship/love. Keep up the wonderful work, buddy! There were a couple grammar mistakes, but I think Anishabd got them all, oh well. Anyways, you're doing great, keep posting, and keep writing!

[Arielle Ann]

wow beautiful poem...!!

Side note: some corrections I think - "haven’t known"
"chat lasts"
"imprison you"
Sorry but I always get uncomfortable with grammatical errors(though I too make a lot"....and cant help but point out!!!

[Ami N.]

Aww this is so sweet :) Nicely written. Bravo (lucky your friend :P he sure is gonna be sweet to deserve a poem like that :D)

Wonderful.

[Andrea Vargas]

I love it! good write (:

[Shy Girl]

I hope that your friend is everything you wrote of him. (and if he's who I think he is, then you hit it right on the nose) Very special dude across the pond is he.
Very nice dedication and very nice poem. :)

[Kim]

Awe this is so wonderful, Enjoyed

[Sweets]

This is soo cuteee =)
and sis, that shirt wasn't black ._.
lol it was blue...darkest, but that nooboid didn't correct you D:
so I will xD
anyways, this is soo sweet =)
Getting better and better each day! =D
Keep going =3

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love your phrase of 'bills of love' and 'bills of friendship'
Very sweet and romantic :)

Tremndous work once again :)