Sweet Forever

Sweet Forever

 

When your body

Comes into its final grave

With the first gate

Which belong to me

That oblige you

To give up your sweet things ...

 

Your first and last kiss I get

It was just mine,

But then while moving toward

Your last destiny

You can't along

Except if I killed you

By my strongest bones

And all your parts

Fall apart ...

 

You made me feel

The best in life

You give me too

The most Hermon I need

Oh, my chocolate bar

You were so sweet

Before and after your rest

In my biggest grave ...

Author's Note

I'm sure you didnt know what I'm talking about before i said that :P

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This is really sweet. The metaphors were put nicely into words, given the fact that they are quite overused sometimes in many poems and stories. I liked the sudden turn in the ending, that was lovely. Well done.

[Thea]

This is a really nice poem...
I enjoyed reading it..
Well done...
:)))

[god is not great, I am]

quite amusing.
Nicely done.

[EMF]

Lady, To begin with you had me wondering what the Hell was going on, and then the reveal... I laughed myself silly and may just have woken up half of my customers. A wonderfully poem that gives a slap to idiots like me with their preconceptions

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Indeed a suprising end. Very well written.

[Arielle Ann]

h aha,,,,that had a surprise end to it...loved it!