Never

Never

 

"Never trust your dreams"

My heart screamed in loud

"Never believe in thoughts"

My mouth revealed this truth

"Never look toward the past "

My mind said in that day

"Never believe in love"

My soul said while dying..

 

But none of my senses said

To never trust you

Because they never felt my pain

Author's Note

I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw...I like this piece a lot! There's so much truth in here!
A brilliant poem...
""Never believe in thoughts"
My mouth revealed this truth"
I like this part!
Nicely done!
:)))

[Dove]

Wow so simple but yet so amazing. I really like this piece. Fantastic poem!

[khalid]

so nice simple and expressing real feelings of a confused person
i really like it
keep on

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very profound, deep and poetic...
Excellent poem :)