I Tried A Lot …But Life Stopped Me

I Tried A Lot …But Life Stopped Me

 

Trying to hold memories

But they scatter all around

Like papers in a windy day ..

 

Trying to keep my smile

But it fade away

With the leave of autumn..

 

Trying to stare at you forever

But the fog of winter

Steel you from between my eyes...

 

Trying to face the truth

But when I look I feel blind

And now i knew that it is hidden

Between the leaves of the trees ...

 

Trying to say :"I love thee "

But the silence of the night

Make me feel so shy ..

 

Trying to capture every beautiful moment

But the darkness of the night

Stopped me and made the blank ...

 

I tried so many things

But life stops me

And you want you did too ....

Author's Note

Just for him ..
Hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

There were multiple grammatical errors in the story, specifically in the time tenses of words, and telling if a word is singular or plural.
Despite that, this was beautiful. The first stanza was amazing, and this was a very fantastic poem. Emotions flow nicely in this poem. Another wonderful poem written by you, keep it up.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Another fantastic poem written by you! Just lovely.. it's so sad too..
Very relatable!

[Andrea Vargas]

This was beautiful (:

[khalid]

although it is just for him, i really like it

[EMF]

A true heart breaker of a poem. Wonderful reflection of moons in weather. Perfect phrasing and perfect pace. As good as it gets

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A marvellous piece...love the anaologies you have with the
seasons/weather.....
A terrific flowing love poem :)

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

I loved it your very talented

[Inyourshadow]

Last line needs to be altered apart from that I love the use of natural metaphors for your feelings, life does seem to so often get in the way causing us to feel lost.
Heart felt words, keep em' coming

[Thea]

Yay...I don't know why I felt sad while reading this...
Anyway, it's a very wonderfully written poem...I enjoyed every line...
The emotions are well captured in this piece...
:)))