Hey Man ..I’m here

Hey Man ..I’m here

 

Hey can you reach my heart

Man can you see me here

Will you put me in your love chart

Or just leave me in the nowhere …

 

Man I really sacrificed a lot

More than you think I did

But you always saw me as a black spot

Can you please make me your new thread…

 

Man I love you please feel me

I’m walking in the sorrow road

And no one is looking at me

Please give me the chance to be your bride …

 

Here I am man standing here

Beside the sea

And above the mountains

I’m here waiting for you …

 

Would you come today

Or will you let me wait

Be sure that I’m here

Loving you more everyday ….

 

I Adore You

6:50 PM

18/2/2012

Author's Note

I hope you like it :D

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"Hey can you reach my heart
Man can you see me here
Will you put me in your love chart
Or just leave me in the nowhere …"
The first three lines in this stanza sounded like a song to me :D Which really aided the reading and that's most writers goals :D Congrats on achieving that!

"Here I am man standing here
Beside the sea
And above the mountains
I’m here waiting for you …"

Such emotion from you in this one...overflowing no matter the place, circumstance etc...very powerful!

~M.Babu~

[Tai Ryens]

I very much liked this; it's really sweet and lovely. Very romantic and it shows the dedication you have for your loved one; don't ever let go, for this love is strong. Keep it up!

[Thea]

That is definitely a sweet and lovely poem, Suhad...You express your love in such unique way! Great work...
:)))

[Layla Anne Massaro]

A very lovely poem. Your emotions overflowed here.

[Katarzyna Slade]

sweet ... lovely write

[paradise]

amazing once again keep em coming

[Cassie Fraga]

very well expressed... a lovers plea... can relate to such a plea.
That was a very well written piece!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very adorable poem....so loving and sweet...
very romantic as always,
love it once again :)