hostage

only i am responsible for my actions

i'm a hostage in my own mind

drowning in the words that flood

making it hard to focus

hard to breathe

i'm losing hope 

hope that i'll get out 

i'm a murderer of my own dreams

thoughts of not succeeding pool in 

making me quit

give up

i will never be something

be good at anything

i'm a burden on my own heart 

losing people i love

making myself hurt

my own heart break

growing weak 

not strong

Reviews

[tedefroberts]

Good use of a theme premise, speech pattern and concrete words!