Resist the light

Like when moths flutter towards the fire's light

Enchanted by the glistening bright

embers that flickers towards the sky 

Your love will be what makes me die!!!!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe dying for and in love is not such a bad thing?
i like your brevity...you give us just enough to chew on...and digest what we feel from the words.
third line should be "flicker"--
but i do like your writing style and themes.
smart poetry.
j.

[elle]

you are correct!

thank you!