Peace ☺

Tears fall,

 

Hearts Break,

 

but no matter how bad things get,

 

nothin can bring you down,

 

exept your self,

 

So keep your head held high,

 

and never dread on the past,

 

or,

 

you will never move on,

 

 If your heart is broken,

 

And tears can't stop falling,

 

Remember,

 

Keep moving forword,

 

and you will soon,

 

find your self in a place,

 

of,

 

PEACE ☺

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

the last four lines were so real and good, peace is something that we find within ourselves, lovely poem, i have written one similar kind of poem called "myself" and hope you would like it....

exep** your self, (there is a small typo in that word, except, i guess you left it unnoticed )... keep writing!

[Angel Bird]

Powerful and true. To be strong in this world we need to truly love and accept ourselves as we are in the first place... only then we'll be sturdy enough to go through everything and find our happiness and peace.
Absolutely great write!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

thanks for reviewing my writing.

[Greg Skura]

Yes the present is the best place to be! Although we all must Rest, Reflect, and Resolve our conscience to truly live in PEACE! Thank you for sharing!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

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