Chosen

Just me talking, really, to those of us whom God has called to lead a holy life. Advice for all of us to leave behind the distractions of this world...

Chosen one,

Set apart

Destiny calls your name

And commands you to be different

 

A broken compass,

A cage without a key

Is going through life

Without Him beside me

 

Slow down,

put something off till tomorrow

Close your eyes,

to all the world that is around you

Reviews

[Chris Willits]

A very nice poem with a clear strong meaning. I love short poems. A great job!

[D. Nelson]

Very good, sends a strong message and is well worded. Great write =]

short and crisp. You have a good message point brought up here.

It feels zen reading this piece. An emotional snapshot.

Good form, good choice of words, well painted imagery.

A good piece