My life with her

A romantic poem

She is the portrait

Of my dreams.

She is the delight

Of my life.

 

Looking at her smiles

My mornings wake.

Hearing her heartbeats

My nights sleep.

 

Held by her hugs

My winters warm up.

Drenched by her kisses

My summers chill.

 

On her caring face

My fears show up.

Between her soft hills

My tears hide.

 

Lying on her arms…

My life shall leave.

Growing in her womb

My memories shall live.

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

Nice imagery and flow.
I liked the last stanza a lot.
A much stronger ending to an already vigorous piece.

Well written.

P.S.: I have read many good poems today by Indians and am so glad that there are writers from India who are writing well. Gives me confidence and hope that the face of Indian Literature is about to change...

[P. Suresh Babu]

Thank you for such a wonderful review. The P.S. is very encouraging.

[Surya pradha]

well written. And just so you know, i'm from chennai too.

[P. Suresh Babu]

Thank you! Glad to know you are from chennai. very soon I will be reading your works.