How it feels..

Surprisingly the first happy poem i have made. Personal experiences yet again

I lay here,
serene

Staring up at the sky,
content

Ignoring the world,
quiet

In my place of peace,
solitude

For thought that upon movement,
doubt

All will be lost,
fear

If i wait long enough,
patience

I know that you'll come,
trust

And lay here with me,
hapiness

Until the end of the world,
love

Reviews

[HPsGurl1]

Beautiful, I feel like I'm in my happy place when I'm:

Reading
Staring up at the sky
Listening to birds chirp
Hearing the gentle crashes of waves

You get the idea ...

Anyways, I thought that this one was beautiful because it not only showed how you'd like to spend your time (I guess) without the every day hectic, but it also vibrates that something and someone give you true happiness.

[Voice11]

Very Very beautiful! I don't think any other poem could describe such emotion so wonderfully! Keep up the great talent!