(most) rap isn't poetry

Just playing Devils Advocate. cause i like to mess with all the poets who know it.

anyone can talk

of the selfish desires

for which the heart mires

I can talk of the way a booty shakes

“make{s} that a*s quake”

Where is the love

True and simple love

People seem to forget

You cannot have the top without the stalk

Author's Note

please take this with a grain of salt. and maybe two.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think even with the smile this might portend, there is real substance to the idea that words have to have strong roots to mean something---often they are just words, just to make an impression...but the real impressions run deep...and have strong foundation in feeling.

[surfingdragoncat]

exactly what I was going for! thankyou