Nothing But Bone

There's something about you

I'm not sure what it is

But it hits me in the chest

Where my heart used to be

When you stole my breath

By caring that day

You drew blood from me

Where there was nothing but bone.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

it came short and simple but within its simplicity holds a great meaning, kudos.

[quinfinn]

you truly have the soul of a poet, that is for sure. i love this in its entirety. the message is a perfect delivery and is not over burdened or encumbered by excess baggage or contradiction. this goes into my faves.... a place of honor.