To Death I Fall

I can’t forgive you

Can’t forget you

I see you everywhere

And I want to pull out my hair

 

 

F**k! you b*****d

See what you have done

I can’t fight any further

This battle you have won

 

I don’t love you

I never did

But you made me believe

That there was good

 

So forget it,

Forsake it all

I’m done living

To death I fall

Author's Note

another despair.... any thoughts? reactions?

Reviews

[EllenMichelle29]

A lot of emotion shown is a small amount of words. Most people don't like swearing in poems, but you pull it off nicely. You have great talent.

[Siren]

I usually don't swear in my writing, but when I'm writing about my past, it can come out. Thanks for your review, your words are highly appreciated.

[EllenMichelle29]

Your welcome, I enjoyed the read :) I hope maybe sometime you could check my work out?

[Siren]

Sure! I'm hoping to, actually.

[Empty Spaces]

this is deep

[luviva]

ohhh this is so touching. guess you wrote this after a breakup right??
but all in all you conveyed your feelings so well.