Understand

sick and sore

been here before

did the best i can

hope you understand

didn't mean to lie

won't let you watch me die

so i'll live

but i won't forgive

Author's Note

meh...it's not great, but what thoughts/reactions do you have?

Reviews

[luviva]

wow.. simple, precise but heavy with meaning and emotion. I can feel your anger,
great write!!

[Siren]

thanks so much! i didn't think it was that great, but your words are quite encouraging

[luviva]

it was actually..!! just believe in your pen

[Siren]

i will try! :D