The Exorcist Doll

Dead black eyes stare out of tilted head

She is not sleeping in her bed

 

Neck bent and twisted all askew

Here comes the priest to make her new

 

Covered in her cracked grey skin

He romances out the demon within

 

Tendrils of smoke seep from those eyes

Where something beyond darkness lies

 

Will she ever be human and free?

Well dear, just you watch and see.

 

Author's Note

Once again, the product of a tortured mind. Thoughts and reaction?

Reviews

[Bluefire]

=o This is amazing! Pretty creepy, reminds me of the movie, "The Exorcist."
Very well done!

[Enid Blake]

Yeah quite disturbing - I like it :)

[Empty Spaces]

scared the crap out of me but it was a thrill to read

[Rob Santana]

My kinda write. Good job. Demented minds think alike.

[DarkDaughter]

WoW.. I really like your poem is so spooky. Really Good job!

[Siren]

thanks so much (: nightmares are great for writing inspiration

[DarkDaughter]

x0a00x0ax ;D Hm.. u gave some spooky poem ideas right now thank you girl ;D

[Siren]

always welcome! :D

[Salar Majak]

ok you officailly scared the hell out of me!. this one is great, creepy,chilling and awkwardly beautifulXD. good write

[beautiful dreamer]

good poem

[quinfinn]

"the power of christ compels you" i keep thinking of the exorcist...and that really gross and wicked scene with regan and the priest. well done!

[Siren]

I've never actually seen the Exorcist, but it was the only way I could describe the dead doll-faced girl with a broken neck and black eye-holes that I saw in my dreams. looks like I was able to use the title well.