All On My Sleeve

All On My Sleeve

A Poem by Siren

Fighting tears
Falling fears
Grinding ears
Deafened gears
Confused 
Abused
Used
Fighting fears
Falling fears
Grinding gears
Deafened ears

© 2012 Siren


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Siren
just...something

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i love the way you turned the phrases around at the end of the first and third stanzas. brilliant and deadly effective. awesome write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Siren

13 Years Ago

thanks! i was wondering what you might think of that.
quinfinn

13 Years Ago

i love it....well done!

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 Added on December 23, 2012
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Siren
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Well....if you must know, I (sometimes) live in the real world. I love listening to music because it lets me breathe. I love laughing because it lets me live. I love writing because it lets me (almost.. more..