A Cold Rain

A cold rain 

fell as they

laid him down

to rest.

The wailing cries

of mourners

had no hint

of jest.

It chilled me

to the bone

and shook me to my 

core.

I'd never known

such a painful

agony of grief

before.

A cold rain

fell as they

laid my love

to rest.

Author's Note

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