Fall

a short poem about the season

There's a sweet

song

in the air.

It comes around 

when the leaves fall down.

There's a magical

feeling

every-where.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[~ Stefanie ~]

This is short and sweet. It may not have a lot behind it, but it lets me picture Fall and I like that :) Great job!

[maurice_forgets]

Hi Sorrow,

This is a nice ambient piece; I like it. It doesn't really go anywhere, but far be it from me to offer that observation as criticism, because my own writing is similar in that regard.

I think that ambience which goes nowhere is (mostly) perfectly OK. :)