The Story of the Girl Who Was Left Behind

Standing.

Sitting.

Staying.

Waiting.

Watching.

Wanting.

Hoping

Hating.

Hurting.

Author's Note

any thoughts on a better title are helpful, as well as thoughts in general.

Reviews

[Haunzwürthe]

When you have poems as short as these, the title is even more critical and can even serve as part of your poem. I like the title as is. It gives direction and focus to otherwise single words that could be applied to near anything. If you want to change it, i would suggest you avoid any ambiguity at all.