Smile Factory

Did i ever tell you??

It's you who bring back my lost smile

These eyes restlessly search for you

in every corner they can reach.

Looking for clues to find you, 

a senseless conversation i build 

Your voice, your fragrance, your presence 

everything I want around me

As mine i wish to make them all,

and blush on these thought i dwell.

Those smile you splashed on me,

those chats

those moments silent as space

I re-live those days

on a touch of your thought in my present

Memories, beautiful & fresh as the monsoon rain

 

Reviews

[Jack...]

Beautiful poem..and once again your smile shines bright. These memories we always have and if they produce a smile, then all the better. Very nicely penned

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid poem...Take care...:).................

[Gaurav Walia]

Quite lovely and it delineates your pretty soul. Nicely written. KUDOS!

[Tate Morgan]

Ah the feelings embodied in the kindly smile Evoke memories in me of my own granddaughter

[sushi]

I am happy that this write evoked a sweet memory of yours.... Thanks for your kind review :)

[Asif Bhat]

beautiful...awesome....it was nice reading......

[sushi]

Thanks Asif...

[Asif Bhat]

welcome.......

[Holly]

So sweet and thoughtful... I loved the flow. Great work!

[Ankit Kumar]

short n precise...the 2nd last stanza
Those smile you splashed on me,
those chats
those moments silent as space

kooool :)

[Frieda P]

Who could resist monsoon rain smiles, that's gotta be huge ;-) ....a feel good poem sushi, nice job.