Frustration

The sun's ray pierce my eyes
The breeze hits my ear drum
to me a headache.

Fluorescent  monitor screan stare at me
like wide eye keeping watch
The rain hits hard like hail
and dreams kill my sleep.

Feel like frozen champagnes
- wanting to break into pieces
to set free; self.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

I like your pen on this, the imagery is good and expresses vividly how things can frustrate and the need to break free, a feeling most people come across.