Invisible Lover

There is a star
that shines far high.
I dream of it each day
with open eyes.
All night I stay awake,
watch it shine.
Whole day I re-collect
and smile.

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Sweet..!!!!

[Emily]

I like it, but the word whole doesn't seem to fit in to me. Great poem, though!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Refreshing-again.It's such a...pretty poem!:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and dispelled of void emotion, good read

[Aurora Lynn]

This poem is short and sweet, which makes it all that much better. You didn't waste words in trying to get us to see what you see. Good job.

~Aurora

[Hello, Goodbye]

curiously delightful notions