The Moments -1

A Poem by sushi

I am trying to pretend cool
least wanna look normal
but,
don't know what impression you get
from this uncontrollable smile on my face....

Beautiful lake, a pleasant weather
all shades of green
and,
my dream girl sitting beside.
Forgive me this day oh heavens!
I am the happiest man on the world....

© 2011 sushi

Author's Note

To be true to myself, i liked this one more than the second part... I liked the last two lines
"Forgive me this day oh heavens!
I am the happiest man on the world"

The second part gave me a feel that it needs to be worked on towards perfection...

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Suditi

This is a so beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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sushi

Pune, India

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I landed here in an attempt to be myself and put out the thoughts in my mind. Its not some diary pages i scribble for the sake of writing, its my memories. Few, which i would preserve close to my h.. more..