Hidden Shadows

My mind can just be full of dark shadows that it can just take over my mind

I open my eyes, 

Darkness all around, 

Wind blowing hard, 

Trees going back and forth, 

And a howl of a wolf that goes through my ears.

I heard a creak, 

Startled, 

Heart beating faster than ever! 

I see a shadow, 

I don't know what it is, 

If it was only a huge rock, 

A branch, 

An animal, 

Or maybe even human.

When I tried to move closer, 

I hear another step closer, 

I freeze with no movement.

Was this a dream? 

If it was i needed to wake up.

I closed my eyes

And opened it again..

Still in the same place..

Cold and dark.

A word finally came out of my mouth..

'Hello? '

No answer, 

Just the wind blowing harder.

Again i said, 

'Hello! ? '

Nothing..

Than goes a whisper, 

'Shh, they're watching you'

I froze blinking my eyes closed.

I opened my eyes and

I'm back in bed with a note in my hand, 

I looked at it, it read: 

'Shh, they're watching you'

My eyes just widened, 

and my heart just stopped.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of mystery in the poem. I liked the internal thoughts and the note given. You create good vision and you left the reader with questions. Could be a good lead for a scary tale. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Vishuddha]

This would be fun if it wasn't so spooky. But, spooky it is! I read it and freeze. Very effective.
(You might consider "A word finally came out of my mouth" - more accurate. It threw me off but only because I come from a family of English teachers.)

[Suvada]

I kind of liked the spookiness it still gives me little chills lol :) but thank you for the advice my english very good so I'm still working on it but thank you for the advice and comment :)