My life

about my life

went from livin in a car to livin in a house

eatin nothin to eatin everything like a mouse

momma told me i was adopted thought it was a lie

she had proof didnt kno my birth mom or dad nearly made me cry

my life was bad now its all good

go back and change it if i could

thank god now i got shoes on my feet

if i wasnt adopted i would still be living on the streets

Author's Note

how do you like it

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like it but maybe next time you can go more into depth and put more emotion but its still good and it seems like you've had a rough time